Help with some English corrections

My company asked me to look into their website and correct the mistakes...I need some help...
What is correct 100% of the audience 100% OF THE TIME or OF THE TIMES?

time

Off hand I'd say it should read - 100% of the audience 100% OF THE TIME - but would need to know the context to be certain.

time

"Slingshot enables its clients to meet the most demanding requirements for accessing and delivering proprietary information. Financial facts and figures, quotes, prices, and any data that needs to be kept secure - all can be streamed, constantly updating, over the Internet or on any internet-style network. With Slingshot, information reaches 100% of the audience, 100% of the time."

time

definitely time

I think it would be better if i share the website with you guys and let you have crack at it, so here it is: www.swissrisk.com HAVE FUN!

Lazy sod.

http://www.swissrisk.com/securities/slingshot.php this page is already done!

Are you asking us to do your job for you? How much are you paying?

I prefer your original suggestion, otherwise pls change from 'all of the time' to 'every time'.

what are you paying editor bob to have his web forum correct your lousy English?

JESUS, i do not get paid for this, I am doing it on my spare time. And nobody is forcing you to help. Thank you guys (the ones that are helping).

I see you put in your profile your native language as Spanglish.

I would have thought this question wouldn't have needed to be asked by a native English speaker.

Your company doesn't pay you?

wow you are so clever silty1, did you arrive at that conclusion all by yourself? or did your grandma helped you?

Btw, your use of capitals is inconsistent - "Internet" and "internet-style" - you should opt for one and stick to it (IMO, it should be capitalised).

Hi,

Sorry if you took that to be an insult. It was meant to deflect the heat from you.

sorry i misunderstood sitly1! I apologize.

tis no big deal

It needs proofing. Style is awkward, capitalisation and acronyms inconsistent, hyphens shaky, prepositions incorrect. Oh, and sentence one is missing a word.

"Proprietary information is the one element every financial services business has be able to access"

"Slingshot has been engineered to delivery of data to any user"

Seriously, pay a professional.

suggestion


can be streamed in real-time over the Internet or any Internet-style network

I'm also surprised that your company pays no salary


agree

Jesus, please don't use that as a phrase. Yuk.

I think "real time" doesn't need a hyphen since it's being used as a noun.

May i remind you guys that I did not write these things, I am picking out things that have to be corrected, I am fowarding all the mistakes that you have found. Thanks again.