Story writing game for Friday

Not sure if this will work or not, but i'm bored and it's friday so lets give it a try.

The idea is I will post the first chapter of a story. Then people can post their own chapters to progress the story along however they want.

Lets see if this works then...

1...

Jack squeezes his eyes tightly closed as each deep gasp for air sends a bolt of pain though his skull. His brain feels loose and slow. With each deep breath a reminder of the one to many last drinks at the sleazy bar he left 2 hours ago.

"Get it together, Jack!", he says under his breath.

Each word releases a breath of hot steam into the air in front of him. He lifts his head to the sky and the drops of rain hit him like bullets. He starts to catch his breath.

"Hey You!", a man screams from down the alley way.

Jack swings his head towards him, his brain follows a second later. A man wearing a dark suit is running towards him, gun in hand.

Jack pushes his arms away from the wall he is resting his body on and starts to run towards the end of the alley way. His whole body starts to ache as he trys to put distance between him and the man in black. He runs harder and harder, stumbling and slipping as this knees become weaker each time a foot hits the rough, wet pavement below him.

Jack slides to a stop at the end of the alley way, hands on his knees, stomach in his mouth as he once again gasps for air. He looks up.

Dawn breaks over the gloomy urban skyline in front of him.

and then she appears out of nowhere, claudia, naked! it is all not so gloomy now!

nevertheless, Jack couldn't believe that he'd broken Dawn. Claudia was scant recompense for his stupidity. (Edit: Board's fucked again and put my post above Arshoo's even though it came second)

dam jim dawn got there before claudia

she was always late in coming! thats why she had hated having sex, it was all over before she knew it, she was left with this thirst for more, is it always going to be like this, she wondered?

can anyone out there satisfy me...woe is me and wo is drie lions

Suddenly, a bloke appeared out of thin air. "Fuck me" he muttered, scratching his head, his fingers scrabbling through his matted locks like fingers scrabbling through matted locks. "That was weird".

Where did you spring from asked Jack?
"Well, one minute I was in the West Indies with my wife..."
"Jamaica?" quizzed Jack
"No - she came of her own accord"

so dangeross are you going to add-judge the competition

Think I misjudged the reading public on this one. Maybe I would have more luck in Adult Chat...

Only if you wanted Jack to start fisting the man in the suit. (Edit: Fucking board software).

In all seriousness Dangeross, if you want it to be serious ask the mods to delete my posts, and then I'll stay clear. Can't promise anybody else will...it is friday afternoon afterall...

U lot are nuts

*bump*
Now two years later Jack awakens from his two year coma in a little bavarain village called Augsburg (Verboen Liebe music in background).

"Where the H-e-l-l am I?"
I remember grabbing a pint with some germans and...

... a succulent tit. The woman lambasted me with her walking stick, sending me into a parallel universe where every day is Friday, especially Wednesdays.

And its september but sign says oktoberfest.